Submit planning Worksheets
3 and 4 here
Both of these docs are clearly organized and contain
some good sentences.
However, some of the concepts are a little too general
and would be hard to quantify.
I see your note about the first planning sheet,
and I'll see what happened. Thanks for letting me know.
Submit a description of
your topic, format, and source list here
Am I overlooking where you let me know which format
you'll be using?
The data and sources look great.
Infographic? Brochure? and source for one of those
Rough draft for Major
Assignment 1
Interesting topic and approach. Try to make information
and numbering easier to follow.
I think your headline could be smaller and opening text
needs to be pared down.
Chart at the bottom looks great but is hard to
read--try to make more space for it.
See other margin notes.
I like the neutral beige color--make info look more
inviting but also serious.
Submit final version of
M.A. #1 here
Much better. Really like the changes for clarity.
Sources still take up a little too much room--so maybe
just using tiny URLs would help to fit them all on and still be able to read
them?
Nice work.
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